Little word of advice - take your time to post, don't just say 'OMGGG!!! JB LIKE SO CUTE! K BYE NOW!'. Nobody will want to follow you that way. Oh, and keep an open mind. Your blog should invite everyone to read, not just 'beliebers'.
Basically, I was just saying to kick it up a notch. __
Here's your about me now: Hi i am a basic tween girl. I love dogs. My favorite dog is a pit bull. My best friends blog is WWW.alyssa-i-like-pie.blogspot.com. I'm a guitarist, dancer, singer, and soon to be actress(warning im not professional). I love my pet Hamster Fifi Lou and i am going to get a Guinea Pig Dixie. i have two bros, a step-dad, a sister, and a mom. i love to play volleyball!
Here it is with correct grammar, punctuation, etc: Hi, I'm your basic tween girl. I love dogs, my favorite dog is the Pit Bull. My best friend's blog is www.alyssa-like-pie.blogpot.com. I love to sing, dance, act, and I am currently learning guitar. I love my pet hamster, Fifi Lou, and I am going to get a Guinea Pig, who I plan to name Dixie. I have two brothers,a step-dad, a sister, and a mom. I love to play volleyball!
Here it is before, but more...organized: Hiya! I'm your basic tween girl - a belieber who's into music, art, and such. I LOVE dogs, especially Pit Bulls (so cute :3)! I love my pet hamster, Fifi Lou, and I'm going to get a Guinea Pig, who I plan to name Dixie. I love to sing and dance; I'm currently learning guitar. I LOVE to play volleyball :) My bestie's blog is www.alyssa-like-pie.blogspot.com. I have two brothers, a sister, a mom, and step-dad.
Little word of advice - take your time to post, don't just say 'OMGGG!!! JB LIKE SO CUTE! K BYE NOW!'. Nobody will want to follow you that way. Oh, and keep an open mind. Your blog should invite everyone to read, not just 'beliebers'.
ReplyDeleteYour bestie,
Alyssa
Well what if i only want beliebers to read it! k not really.
ReplyDeleteBasically, I was just saying to kick it up a notch.
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Here's your about me now:
Hi i am a basic tween girl. I love dogs. My favorite dog is a pit bull. My best friends blog is WWW.alyssa-i-like-pie.blogspot.com. I'm a guitarist, dancer, singer, and soon to be actress(warning im not professional). I love my pet Hamster Fifi Lou and i am going to get a Guinea Pig Dixie. i have two bros, a step-dad, a sister, and a mom. i love to play volleyball!
Here it is with correct grammar, punctuation, etc:
Hi, I'm your basic tween girl. I love dogs, my favorite dog is the Pit Bull. My best friend's blog is www.alyssa-like-pie.blogpot.com. I love to sing, dance, act, and I am currently learning guitar. I love my pet hamster, Fifi Lou, and I am going to get a Guinea Pig, who I plan to name Dixie. I have two brothers,a step-dad, a sister, and a mom. I love to play volleyball!
Here it is before, but more...organized:
Hiya! I'm your basic tween girl - a belieber who's into music, art, and such. I LOVE dogs, especially Pit Bulls (so cute :3)! I love my pet hamster, Fifi Lou, and I'm going to get a Guinea Pig, who I plan to name Dixie. I love to sing and dance; I'm currently learning guitar. I LOVE to play volleyball :) My bestie's blog is www.alyssa-like-pie.blogspot.com. I have two brothers, a sister, a mom, and step-dad.
Which one do you like best?
i like the last one!!!!
ReplyDeleteI see you changed your About Me. It's better than the other one.
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